Very well done.
First of all, I'd like to commend you on being able to fit all that text in there. I'd bet my pinkies that that must have been a pain to deal with.
The layout of it was somewhat simple, but it made it very easy to interpret was going on.
I also like your choice of music, that fit in very well with the story. Now I must ask you... (was it the song that made you think of this story? Or was the story inspired by something else?)
The story was very interesting, and heartbreaking as well. I'll admit I cried to it.
And finally, the pictures. The pictures were very unique and well done. They portray the story very well, and all I can say is, I wish I could even draw.
With that, I shall leave you with a 5/5 and 10/10.
My hat's off to you good sir.
~Hasonish